the clock ticks,the sun sets,
the seconds flow fast
the darkness sets on the seaside
after those last rays of bygone hopes
kid spreads his arms for help
old dead mother waits for her son to come home
girl stares at the door for her dad to return
lady on her couch lies down to be touched again by her love
we bleed everyday with no more tears to wet our cheeks
we still hope to see the rays of life but
seconds move on, sun sets and rises
wounds tie up, pain goes no where
it never dries with those tears
it remains frozen like the mark of those bullets.
Painless painful marks.
PN's Scoop:
It's one of those last 10 minutes fast food writeup, hope i have done justice. I am not attempting to express the pain of the people who had lost there near and dear ones(like the Indian media celebrated 26/11 the whole week), if i do then i am a big ass on this earth. I beleive other than that person no one else can understand his/her pain.
My salute to all those people who lost their near dear ones and are still surviving with that pain.
the seconds flow fast
the darkness sets on the seaside
after those last rays of bygone hopes
kid spreads his arms for help
old dead mother waits for her son to come home
girl stares at the door for her dad to return
lady on her couch lies down to be touched again by her love
we bleed everyday with no more tears to wet our cheeks
we still hope to see the rays of life but
seconds move on, sun sets and rises
wounds tie up, pain goes no where
it never dries with those tears
it remains frozen like the mark of those bullets.
Painless painful marks.
PN's Scoop:
It's one of those last 10 minutes fast food writeup, hope i have done justice. I am not attempting to express the pain of the people who had lost there near and dear ones(like the Indian media celebrated 26/11 the whole week), if i do then i am a big ass on this earth. I beleive other than that person no one else can understand his/her pain.
My salute to all those people who lost their near dear ones and are still surviving with that pain.

Hey Captain..
Nice write-up is all I can say.. as you have put it right that those who bear the pain only knows how does it feel to lose ur loved ones, to miss them each and every moment of life , to live life without any motive.. .. :(
Hi PG,
Thanks for the comments as always they are nice.
Rest i agree to everything but not the last sentence(to live life without any motive). Life is too big and Life itself is a teacher, my thoughts anyway.
keep rocking,
PN
True!!! Only somebody who has really felt the pain will know!!!
Nothing more to say but an honest post :)
Thanks Smita for your worth comments :)
Keep Rocking,
PN.
hello.. hmm vry true..but all we can do is to share sum one's pain..and try to wipe their tears and bring smile on their faces..
take care..
keep smiling..
Hi DE,
nice thought!!
thanks for your comments.
Keep Rocking,
PN.